An essay about how proud i'm to be a citizen of the United Arab Emirates

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An essay about how proud i'm to be a citizen of the United Arab Emirates


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I wrote it by myself i hope you all like it and hope it would help you in the exam

[القطوة السمراء]

مشكورة واااااااااايد

[HOLAKOO??]

مشكووورة واايد

[خفآيآ الروح]

ES' SALAM 3LIKOM


YOUR ESSAY IS SO NICE
BUT I THINK THAT YOU MISSED TO THE MOST IMPORTANT PART OF IT
YOUR START WAS RIGHT . BECAUSE IT IS A GENERAL INFORMATION ABOUT THE ESSAY
I THINK AFTER "responsible leaders" YOU SHOULD PUT FULL STOP TO START THE 2 SENTENCE
IN THE INTRODUCTION YOU SHOULD WRITE 3 SENTENCES . AND IN THE THIRD SENTENCE YOU HAVE TO START WITH " I'm going to write an essay about .... "
AND IN THE CONCLUSION YOU SHOULD START WITH FOR EXAMPLE " to sum up , OR all in all .... " AND THAN YOU CAN WRITE IT
i don't know .. that's what the MISS told us


thanks
^^

[yahye]

thanksssssssssssssssss
بس الأمتحان التعبير مقالة و اللا قصة

[حمد محمد الحمادي]

السلام عليكم لوسمحتوا ابي موضوع عن الفخر بالامارات

[حمد محمد الحمادي]

تعديل بالانجليزي الموضوع

[صمتي سياسهـ]

marsee>>>^^

[وصلاوي لللآبد]

مشكورررررررررررررررررررررررررره

[رائـدة فضـاء]

السلام عليكم لوسمحتوا ابي موضوع عن الفخر بالامارات

الموضوع اصلا عن الفخر بالامارات و سوري انا عندي مسابقة ما اقدر اكتب مقال ثاني.

[رائـدة فضـاء]

ES' SALAM 3LIKOM

YOUR ESSAY IS SO NICE
BUT I THINK THAT YOU MISSED TO THE MOST IMPORTANT PART OF IT
YOUR START WAS RIGHT . BECAUSE IT IS A GENERAL INFORMATION ABOUT THE ESSAY
I THINK AFTER "responsible leaders" YOU SHOULD PUT FULL STOP TO START THE 2 SENTENCE
IN THE INTRODUCTION YOU SHOULD WRITE 3 SENTENCES . AND IN THE THIRD SENTENCE YOU HAVE TO START WITH " I'm going to write an essay about .... "
AND IN THE CONCLUSION YOU SHOULD START WITH FOR EXAMPLE " to sum up , OR all in all .... " AND THAN YOU CAN WRITE IT
i don't know .. that's what the MISS told us


thanks
^^





Well thank you for the tips, my teacher told me I was suppose to write it the way I did and I got a full mark in the exam so I thought it would be a great help for others and either way thank you again for those tips.
And about the full stop I can't put it after "responsible leaders" because of but. I don't know which teacher is right because yours says I should've put a full stop but mine says you can't put a full stop before but.

[ليوناردو دفنشي]

thanks you ^_^

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[الباحث الذكي]

it's a nice essay
thank u:(7):

[نسيم القمر]

Thank You Alot ! :)
^,^

[happy -_-face]

thankss
YOUR ESSAY IS VERY NICE

[حمدان الكعبي*]

تقررررررررررررررررررررررررررررير ابغي لو سمحتو مشكور على المقالة الرائعه

[فتاةمسلمة ولله الحمد]

مشكورة اختي ؛) :) ؛)