An essay about how proud i'm to be a citizen of the United Arab Emirates

رائـدة فضـاء — 2011-03-15 14:57 — An essay about how proud i'm to be a citizen of the United Arab Emirates

An essay about how proud i'm to be a citizen of the United Arab Emirates

I'm Proud of UAE.docx

I wrote it by myself i hope you all like it and hope it would help you in the exam

القطوة السمراء — 2011-03-20 10:16

مشكورة واااااااااايد

HOLAKOO?? — 2011-03-20 11:36

مشكووورة واايد

خفآيآ الروح — 2011-03-20 12:30

ES' SALAM 3LIKOM

YOUR ESSAY IS SO NICE
BUT I THINK THAT YOU MISSED TO THE MOST IMPORTANT PART OF IT
YOUR START WAS RIGHT . BECAUSE IT IS A GENERAL INFORMATION ABOUT THE ESSAY
I THINK AFTER "responsible leaders" YOU SHOULD PUT FULL STOP TO START THE 2 SENTENCE
IN THE INTRODUCTION YOU SHOULD WRITE 3 SENTENCES . AND IN THE THIRD SENTENCE YOU HAVE TO START WITH " I'm going to write an essay about .... "
AND IN THE CONCLUSION YOU SHOULD START WITH FOR EXAMPLE " to sum up , OR all in all .... " AND THAN YOU CAN WRITE IT
i don't know .. that's what the MISS told us

thanks
^^

yahye — 2011-03-20 15:37

thanksssssssssssssssss
بس الأمتحان التعبير مقالة و اللا قصة

حمد محمد الحمادي — 2011-03-20 15:38

السلام عليكم لوسمحتوا ابي موضوع عن الفخر بالامارات

حمد محمد الحمادي — 2011-03-20 15:39

تعديل بالانجليزي الموضوع

صمتي سياسهـ — 2011-03-22 08:35

marsee>>>^^

وصلاوي لللآبد — 2011-03-22 09:21

مشكورررررررررررررررررررررررررره

رائـدة فضـاء — 2011-04-11 20:41

حمد محمد الحمادي كتب:السلام عليكم لوسمحتوا ابي موضوع عن الفخر بالامارات

الموضوع اصلا عن الفخر بالامارات و سوري انا عندي مسابقة ما اقدر اكتب مقال ثاني.

رائـدة فضـاء — 2011-04-11 20:55

خفآيآ الروح كتب:
ES' SALAM 3LIKOM

YOUR ESSAY IS SO NICE
BUT I THINK THAT YOU MISSED TO THE MOST IMPORTANT PART OF IT
YOUR START WAS RIGHT . BECAUSE IT IS A GENERAL INFORMATION ABOUT THE ESSAY
I THINK AFTER "responsible leaders" YOU SHOULD PUT FULL STOP TO START THE 2 SENTENCE
IN THE INTRODUCTION YOU SHOULD WRITE 3 SENTENCES . AND IN THE THIRD SENTENCE YOU HAVE TO START WITH " I'm going to write an essay about .... "
AND IN THE CONCLUSION YOU SHOULD START WITH FOR EXAMPLE " to sum up , OR all in all .... " AND THAN YOU CAN WRITE IT
i don't know .. that's what the MISS told us

thanks
^^

Well thank you for the tips, my teacher told me I was suppose to write it the way I did and I got a full mark in the exam so I thought it would be a great help for others and either way thank you again for those tips.
And about the full stop I can't put it after "responsible leaders" because of but. I don't know which teacher is right because yours says I should've put a full stop but mine says you can't put a full stop before but.

ليوناردو دفنشي — 2012-02-16 17:43

thanks you ^_^

الدلع متميز — 2012-02-25 15:45

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الباحث الذكي — 2012-03-08 13:21

it's a nice essay
thank u:(7):

نسيم القمر — 2012-03-11 14:57

Thank You Alot ! :)
^,^

happy -_-face — 2012-03-11 17:01

thankss
YOUR ESSAY IS VERY NICE

حمدان الكعبي* — 2014-02-02 17:01

تقررررررررررررررررررررررررررررير ابغي لو سمحتو مشكور على المقالة الرائعه

فتاةمسلمة ولله الحمد — 2014-02-18 04:13

مشكورة اختي ؛) :) ؛)