فقرة عن too much homework بس ياريت التصحيح

Some student have too much homework .Today i am talking about Why student have too much homework and how to solution this problem

Firstly , other teacher are gives the student too much homework because exertion about lesson , understand and answer on exam . So, should of student talking the teacher about not gives daily homework ,but explain lesson or gives homework but not too much . secondly
, other student not organized time ,so are feeling have too much homework because are needs too much time to do all the homework .Thirdly , other student have a kids so cant study and do homework because are making noise so, should of student do homework and study after the kids sleeping or goes quite place to do homework .

In end,i want saying tip of student : please organize time because doing the homework

ياريت حد يصحح ولو في اي استفسار انا موجودة

يااااااااااااااريت حد يرد على الموضوع ضرووووووووووووووووووووووري

الموضوع فيه وايد اخطاء

Some students have too much homework .Today Iam talking about Why students have too much homework and how to solve this problem

Firstly , some teachers give the students too much homework to understand the lessons and to help them with their exam.

So, students should talk with their teachers for not having too much homework
just few exercises for understanding the lessons

secondly
, another students dont organize their time ,So they feel boring form having too much homework because they need more time to do it .finally, some of the students cant study or do their homework because they have kids in their homes . So students must stay away from kids when they study or do their home work

In the end,I advise the students to organize their time and consitrate with their teachers in the class because that may help them to do their homework in easy way

اختي نسمه موضوعج حلو وأفكاره وايد حلوه بش مشكلتج الgrammer ,وترتيب الجمل.

أنا حاولت أصلح الأخطاء وغيرت شوي من الصيغة إن شاء الله يعيبج وتستفيدين منه واسمحيلي ع القصور

أختج كشووووووووه

ملف مرفق 35035 ,, المرفق

هذا تصحيح الفقرة مالج والي تحته خط يعني ماله داعي وغلط
والي بالحمر هذا تصحيح
وفي شي بين قوسين يعني تقدرين تغيرين الي انتي كاتبته وتحطين هذا

موفقه انشالله

actuality , i like it ;)

تصحيح
Some student have too much homework .Today i am talking about Why student have too much homework and how to solution this problem
Firstly , other teacher are gives the student too much homework because exertion about lesson , understand and answer on exam . So, should of student talking the teacher about not gives daily homework ,but explain lesson or gives homework but not too much . secondly
, other student not organized time ,so are feeling have too much homework because are needs too much time to do all the homework .Thirdly , other student have a kids so cant study and do homework because are making noise so, should of student do homework and study after the kids sleeping or goes quite place to do homework .
In end,i want saying tip of student : please organize time for doing the homework

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السلام عليكم اختي نسمة

صففحة كم هذاا 35 ولا ؟؟

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