روح السامبا
10-01-2010, 07:51 PM
السلام عليكم والرحمة
أنا كتبت هذي الفقرة فحاب آخذ رايكم فيها
وخاصة من حيث والمقدمة والخاتمة والموضوع وأرجو تنبيهي لو كان هناك أخطاء إملائية
الفقرة بعنوان : I'm proud to be emirati
I'm proud to be emirati because I born in it and it gives me many thing. I like many traditional like camel racing. My country equal between men and women. I think that many people is proud to be emirati
There are many traditional in my country like camel racing and Al-Razeef. Most people like camel racing. It was only the sport of Bedouin. Races were help at festivals. But my favorit traditional is Al-Razeef. It is two facing lines of men recite verses. There are many people like different traditional
My country equal between men and women. In the past, women can't study and do any things. Now a days, women can study n school and after that they going to study in colleges or universities. After finish study they can work in differnt jobs
Like almost all young people, I'm eager to learn more about the history and traditions of my people because I belive that the real wealth of the country is in it's youth
أرجو منكم المساعدة في تزبيط الفقرة وتغيير ما هو خطأ
وإخباري ما إذا كانت المقدمة والخاتمة ملائمة للموضوع أم لا
أنتظركم يا أصحاب وهذا الموضوع قد يفيدنا جميعاً في الاختبار
فلازم كلنا نتعاون في هذا الموضوع لنستفيد منه ونجعل هذا الموضوع حوار جدي بيننا لتصحيح الفقرة ^^
أنا كتبت هذي الفقرة فحاب آخذ رايكم فيها
وخاصة من حيث والمقدمة والخاتمة والموضوع وأرجو تنبيهي لو كان هناك أخطاء إملائية
الفقرة بعنوان : I'm proud to be emirati
I'm proud to be emirati because I born in it and it gives me many thing. I like many traditional like camel racing. My country equal between men and women. I think that many people is proud to be emirati
There are many traditional in my country like camel racing and Al-Razeef. Most people like camel racing. It was only the sport of Bedouin. Races were help at festivals. But my favorit traditional is Al-Razeef. It is two facing lines of men recite verses. There are many people like different traditional
My country equal between men and women. In the past, women can't study and do any things. Now a days, women can study n school and after that they going to study in colleges or universities. After finish study they can work in differnt jobs
Like almost all young people, I'm eager to learn more about the history and traditions of my people because I belive that the real wealth of the country is in it's youth
أرجو منكم المساعدة في تزبيط الفقرة وتغيير ما هو خطأ
وإخباري ما إذا كانت المقدمة والخاتمة ملائمة للموضوع أم لا
أنتظركم يا أصحاب وهذا الموضوع قد يفيدنا جميعاً في الاختبار
فلازم كلنا نتعاون في هذا الموضوع لنستفيد منه ونجعل هذا الموضوع حوار جدي بيننا لتصحيح الفقرة ^^